The bass like gets a little hypnotic after 20 or 30 times. This is one of the problems in writing a long form tune- you have to develop the theme. You do have a good bass line, but how about some space in between each or the bass patterns? I also heard various instruments coming in and out of the mix that didn't really seem to develop into a song with any form. you did mix it well, and I like your drum loops, I would have liked to have heard more development of your ideas.
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Tom,
The bass like gets a little hypnotic after 20 or 30 times. This is one of the problems in writing a long form tune- you have to develop the theme. You do have a good bass line, but how about some space in between each or the bass patterns?
I also heard various instruments coming in and out of the mix that didn't really seem to develop into a song with any form. you did mix it well, and I like your drum loops, I would have liked to have heard more development of your ideas.
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